No new art stuff to post, so thought I'd start posting some of my writing. This is a spec script I wrote of 'The Office"
download here; The Office Spec Script
THE ♥-WORK OF JOSH LIEBERMAN
 First I traced the drawing (one of the greater advantages of having access to a cintique).
First I traced the drawing (one of the greater advantages of having access to a cintique). The first thing I noticed in studying the pose is the line-of-actions of each character and their respective relationship to each other;
The first thing I noticed in studying the pose is the line-of-actions of each character and their respective relationship to each other; The main focus of the pose (and the gag) is Red Riding Hood kissing the cow. All of the line-of-actions work to create a focal point centered around the smooching skulls of Red and the Cow. Red's upper body leans in towards the Cow, as does the Cow's upper body into her. The wolf, as a secondary character to the pose, enhances the juxtaposing angles by mimicking the Cow's slant and creating an even greater push towards Red. The Wolfs angle leads the eye towards the focus of the pose and draws no attention to himself. Red's legs have the same affect on the pose. By having a parallel angle to that of the Cow and the Wolf it even further helps to push the eye towards the important part of the pose. What we find is 3 repeating angles pushing against 1 angle, creating a clear focal point.
The main focus of the pose (and the gag) is Red Riding Hood kissing the cow. All of the line-of-actions work to create a focal point centered around the smooching skulls of Red and the Cow. Red's upper body leans in towards the Cow, as does the Cow's upper body into her. The wolf, as a secondary character to the pose, enhances the juxtaposing angles by mimicking the Cow's slant and creating an even greater push towards Red. The Wolfs angle leads the eye towards the focus of the pose and draws no attention to himself. Red's legs have the same affect on the pose. By having a parallel angle to that of the Cow and the Wolf it even further helps to push the eye towards the important part of the pose. What we find is 3 repeating angles pushing against 1 angle, creating a clear focal point. The eyeline of all three characters lie on the same plane, leaving no question as to where you should be looking.
The eyeline of all three characters lie on the same plane, leaving no question as to where you should be looking. The extraneous limbs of both the Red and the Wolf continue the idea of supporting the main line-of-action by creating a perpendicular angle. It helps lead the eye to the kiss.
The extraneous limbs of both the Red and the Wolf continue the idea of supporting the main line-of-action by creating a perpendicular angle. It helps lead the eye to the kiss. Everything either points directly to or enhances the primary action/focus of the pose.
Everything either points directly to or enhances the primary action/focus of the pose.



 
